This version is better than the similar remix I heard before.
The song tries to be "commercial sounding" yet it is impossible to fully understand the vocals.
The singing is not bad. The lyrics are common and get repeated too much in the song.
Republish this as a loop and I will give it between 4 to 5 stars.
From the third minute to the fourth one, it's not that bad.
I like the background square synth. It reminds me of "Free." (a mobile game). The rest is too repetitive.
Very trite; Was expecting something more original.
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